Wednesday, November 9, 2011
zomwolf
Once upon a time there was a country that has leprechaun they each get gold coins each summer Cesar.H, Luis, and Cesar.f. The three of then went to the forest they found a zomwolf they saw it and they start to run ,but the zomwolf bit Cesar.f in the butt Cesar start to yell. Then he turn into a zomwolf. It was 2 v.s 2 the zomwolf are fast ,but Luis and Cesar.H. made it home and told the leprechaun 'we are attach by zomwolf be in the look out.
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This story was good but needs more details. We need to make sure that are writing complete sentences, there are too many run-ons. Check the placements of periods.
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